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Bran Stark

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A friend lent me the book 'game of thrones' and I started to read it. Here's a picture of Bran Stark and his little Direwolf
(c) George R. R. Martin

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For :iconimprovement-club:

There are many corrections I need.

- I don't draw children many often, and I had a few problem with proportion, because children's bodies are different tha adults'. There is still something that doesn't convince me, but I can't figure out what it is. I'm sure you can help me about this.

- The wolf. I'm not good at drawing animals and when I drew this picture I had no references.

- Hair. I'm not sure they're ok...
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Hello there
Here's a comment from :iconimprovement-club:
First the good things about this drawing
:bulletgreen: I really like the sketchy-style of this drawing.
:bulletgreen: The shading in this drawing is also very nice.

Things you could improve:
:bulletred: You did a pretty good job trying to draw a child, I really like the mouth and he looks quite innocent, just like a child. Remember, childs have bigger heads in proportion than adults, together with bigger looking eyes and also rounder cheeks. The eyes and head are good, but i'm missing the cheeks a bit.
:bulletred: Children also have smaller hands than adults. I don't know if this kid is wearing too big gloves, but the hands look quite big for a (young) child.

Hope this helps you out!
Thank you for posting the drawing!